This is my story so far, plz tell me what u think of it ^^

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The village of Calida was a very quiet place located on the edge of a forest with a towering mountain pass overlooking it like a giant, rocky guardian. The town always has a very beautiful, soothing aroma from the nearby forest which makes the town a very clam and relaxed place to live. The villagers believe that it is because of the creatures that live deep in both the forest and the mountains which make their town so serene and safe and treat the deep areas of the mountain and forest as a sacred ground that only selected people can walk on. But that night there were intruders to their sacred mountain cave, home to the ancient creature of fire. They walked up the craggy mountain. Set up camp outside the cave and began mining into the craggy rocks.

They worked deep into the night. Deeper and deeper they went into the sacred land. They used gigantic, powerful but very quiet machines to drill through the rock and by midnight they had dug all the way into the mountain. They came across a great, dazzling cavern filled with beautiful glittering pillars made of a rare rocky substance that filled the entire cavern as though it was a giant, glistening diamond. The miners walked around the cavern slowly, first they were stuck with awe, but then they started to think more like humans, thoughts of riches, greed and power took over their minds. They picked up their pick-axes, ran towards the biggest pillar in the cavern and started to pick at the rare substance. That’s when the creature awoke. The cavern was filled with an enormous roar and just when the miners turned their heads to see what caused the monstrous noise it was too late. A gigantic wave of heat and molten magma filled the room. The hot, fiery liquid filled the whole cavern in less then 30 seconds; it then started to flow through the hole made by the miners that lead to where they set up camp. The molten fire busted through the hole like a mini volcano, destroying the camp and flowed down the mountain towards the quiet village of Calida.